07-04-2013, 05:23 PM
hey man, I find myself coming back here on a daily basis, I love seeing all the work you put out. The new illustration is coming along nicely too. It looks like a pain in the ass to paint ;p
I think mrfrenik has a good point, all in all it's a pretty solid piece but it has a similar issue that you had with some older work in that the values are all very middle key throughout, and because of that there isn't much in terms of points of interest or focal points. The colours look abit desaturated too, but these are both issues which can be corrected fairly quickly :)
Sweet work as always buddy, keep It coming!
I think mrfrenik has a good point, all in all it's a pretty solid piece but it has a similar issue that you had with some older work in that the values are all very middle key throughout, and because of that there isn't much in terms of points of interest or focal points. The colours look abit desaturated too, but these are both issues which can be corrected fairly quickly :)
Sweet work as always buddy, keep It coming!