01-28-2014, 02:46 PM
Hey man, Great to see constant progress!
I think i see one problem with how you think about form. I think your illustrations of rocks is really pulling up some problems. It seems you have trouble thinking up complex forms that integrate soft and hard shapes. You really need to vary the forms and shapes that you use in your illustrations. For organics you can't just do round bubbles, instead it has to have a mix of shapes. Some razor sharp, others dull, the angles between faces should also change.
Rocks can also have a grain and snap off and show it as well so that's something to consider.
You should also consider what type of rock is it, Is it fast eroding sand stone, or is it slow wearing but brittle slate?
It might be easier with a paintover.
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I think i see one problem with how you think about form. I think your illustrations of rocks is really pulling up some problems. It seems you have trouble thinking up complex forms that integrate soft and hard shapes. You really need to vary the forms and shapes that you use in your illustrations. For organics you can't just do round bubbles, instead it has to have a mix of shapes. Some razor sharp, others dull, the angles between faces should also change.
Rocks can also have a grain and snap off and show it as well so that's something to consider.
You should also consider what type of rock is it, Is it fast eroding sand stone, or is it slow wearing but brittle slate?
It might be easier with a paintover.
Drawing out of perspective is like singing out of tune. I'll throw a shoe at you if you do it.
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