11-22-2020, 01:08 PM
that's a beautiful page! Really filmic with the cuts between her straight on and the other characters right then left then back to her, then this 'overlapping action' in the last panel by revealing a bit of what's coming on the next page. I don't know if you heard this before, but a useful comic technique is to always end the page with a mini cliffhanger to ensure the reader is going to turn the page. This guy does it in a great way : D
Colour wise I think just the process of doing it and observing it so closely already gives so much value. In particular with this page I think some things that really give it the sophisticated look is the use of hard and soft edges. It's really minimal but just having them makes it you think 'oh this guy knows what he's doing'. The little spots of colour saturation, like the strong purple on the guys lips in panel 2 and this warmer colour at the bottom of her face are things that leap out to me.
Great job tho! Does he colour his own work?
Colour wise I think just the process of doing it and observing it so closely already gives so much value. In particular with this page I think some things that really give it the sophisticated look is the use of hard and soft edges. It's really minimal but just having them makes it you think 'oh this guy knows what he's doing'. The little spots of colour saturation, like the strong purple on the guys lips in panel 2 and this warmer colour at the bottom of her face are things that leap out to me.
Great job tho! Does he colour his own work?