11-27-2012, 08:34 PM
hey atrenr,
thanks a lot for the overpaint, it really helped to clarify some issues i had with this piece.
i did some corrections and worked your input in, where i saw it fit. the "implied safety" is no problem for as it was my intention to "save" the player there, when he screwed up the jump. he then drops to the stones and can try again. the scene i have shown here is a part of the vertical slice, where he learns about swinging stuff and double jump. so my intention was to give him/her some challange while keeping it rather safe.
your critics were really helpful especially about the right side. i added some gradients to hopefully show the platforms better. another big issue for me is constructing shadows, i should look into this, as it shows in my work, i am afraid, that i am not too sure with that topic.
thanks a lot for the overpaint, it really helped to clarify some issues i had with this piece.
i did some corrections and worked your input in, where i saw it fit. the "implied safety" is no problem for as it was my intention to "save" the player there, when he screwed up the jump. he then drops to the stones and can try again. the scene i have shown here is a part of the vertical slice, where he learns about swinging stuff and double jump. so my intention was to give him/her some challange while keeping it rather safe.
your critics were really helpful especially about the right side. i added some gradients to hopefully show the platforms better. another big issue for me is constructing shadows, i should look into this, as it shows in my work, i am afraid, that i am not too sure with that topic.