Allenthelost's Sketchbook

[darktiste]

Here a few thing i felt when look at the last piece the line where more straight and this create a rigidity a boxy feeling you might want to avoid for certain reason try to focus on nice curve i think it ok to stylize but you need to understand what your line can do to your figure.On organic object it generally make object become more stylize but it can also drive away from femininity for example making a chin more angular will create a more masculine character.For the cloth you also did that stylistic thing but it change on the fabric read is no longer a thin and light fabric it become more stiff and thick and heavier.Lastly for the way you approached the light and shadow it really a sharp transition of value compare to the soft natural value gradation of the skin.Overall those artistic choose contribute to creating a more muscular and stiff looking character than you might have wanted.