08-14-2012, 04:51 PM
It's really early in the morning for me. So my brain cells are not awake yet. But I'll try to share with you some of my thoughts. I like your composition and the mood of the piece. However the narrative is a bit unclear for me. I have no idea what's going on. If this chick killed those guys? Or someone else killed them and she's running away. What's with the cat? The cat killed those knights and now it's after her? I saw your post in critique thread and I understand you have the biggest problem with foreshortening. But to be honest I really thing this hand have to go. It's distracting and have broken anatomy. Foreshortening is the smallest of your problems here. Side of that you also want to fix your perspective and adjust the values. Hope that makes sens. I like the piece. Once you fix it I think it can become really strong image. And again, those are only my thoughts. And it's really early xD Cheers