02-15-2015, 08:37 PM
Hey man, cool to see you still working hard.
I think you might wanna pay a little bit more attention to your compositions. I think you tend to space things out a little too evenly. Like those still lives you've been doing, I know they are relatively quick, but spend a little bit more time thinking of nice rhythms for your objects. Group some up, space a single thing off to the side, try and avoid those tangents where one object's edge is just touching another. In your pieces with multiple figures (very ambitious, keep at it), notice how in those master studies you do a figure always seems merged with another? Basically just get more overlapping going on, right now you've got this boring dance beat everywhere, get that jazz syncopation going.
Hope that helps!
I think you might wanna pay a little bit more attention to your compositions. I think you tend to space things out a little too evenly. Like those still lives you've been doing, I know they are relatively quick, but spend a little bit more time thinking of nice rhythms for your objects. Group some up, space a single thing off to the side, try and avoid those tangents where one object's edge is just touching another. In your pieces with multiple figures (very ambitious, keep at it), notice how in those master studies you do a figure always seems merged with another? Basically just get more overlapping going on, right now you've got this boring dance beat everywhere, get that jazz syncopation going.
Hope that helps!