09-14-2017, 04:53 AM
Hey there Coinhero!
I really love the volume of work you're doing. There's a lot of nice things in your paintings, you seem to have a pretty good knack for composition and value work.
Paying more attention to, or at least varying, your edge quality and the "shapes" of your colors could really improve your work. Right now, all of your strokes have the same look and it reduces the potential dynamism in your paintings. It would be nice to see some crisper edges defining focal points, as well as softened edges to show form shadows. If you can create crisp areas, then you can also have fun playing with blown out edges - like in your most recent painting, the shadow of the hair and the sleeve on the center girl could nicely fade into the shadow of the building behind her. Right now, that area is quit unclear and muddled.
Keep up the good work!
I really love the volume of work you're doing. There's a lot of nice things in your paintings, you seem to have a pretty good knack for composition and value work.
Paying more attention to, or at least varying, your edge quality and the "shapes" of your colors could really improve your work. Right now, all of your strokes have the same look and it reduces the potential dynamism in your paintings. It would be nice to see some crisper edges defining focal points, as well as softened edges to show form shadows. If you can create crisp areas, then you can also have fun playing with blown out edges - like in your most recent painting, the shadow of the hair and the sleeve on the center girl could nicely fade into the shadow of the building behind her. Right now, that area is quit unclear and muddled.
Keep up the good work!