09-30-2017, 01:18 AM
hey there, you got some nice work, noticed theres a few common things going on. fair few of your pieces have a single or sometimes 2 characters that are spaced out in a bit of a bare scene. the renderings pretty good though some pieces show heaps of small strokes which are so evenly sized they dont read well as differing textures. theres some inconsistent lighting and doesnt benefit the mood which sometimes looks unsure. i like the owl in the tree the bunny in the woods is super white considering the rest of the lighting in the scene. i think you could benefit from more grouping of elements, like with the trees in some pieces which im guessing are less refed, the trees stand out so much individually which you dont need. not trying to put you down in any way, just my impression. good stuff and keep gettn good :)