12-15-2017, 04:00 AM
Cool concept!
I think the recrop is definitely better. I'd also suggest to have them occupy more different spaces. Currently they both share the same vertical third:
You might want to compose something like that if the image is in portrait orientation, or to suggest a close relationship of some kind between characters.
If you're trying to suggest a confrontation, or some kind of distance in their relationship, moving them apart could help that. I did a quick paintover in the gif below to show 2 possibilities. One might let you show the snake winding on itself in a different way, the other might show the scale of he snake and close off the edge of the composition more tightly
I think the recrop is definitely better. I'd also suggest to have them occupy more different spaces. Currently they both share the same vertical third:
You might want to compose something like that if the image is in portrait orientation, or to suggest a close relationship of some kind between characters.
If you're trying to suggest a confrontation, or some kind of distance in their relationship, moving them apart could help that. I did a quick paintover in the gif below to show 2 possibilities. One might let you show the snake winding on itself in a different way, the other might show the scale of he snake and close off the edge of the composition more tightly