07-31-2018, 08:50 AM
I may be wrong, values are not my strong suit by any means, but I feel like your light tones are way to bright. I feel like you haven't managed to capture the distance portrayed in the original painting due to higher contrast. Also, added brightness on the right edge completely breaks composition, since it shifts focal point from the blue inverted triangle, created by the mountains, to the dark lower right corner. Foreground should have been separated much more subtly.