Crimson Daggers — Art forum

Any critiques and input on this would be greatly appreciated

Hi, Fernir! Is that chalk? If so, nice! I've worked with it most of my life and I know how difficult it is to get some results.

Anyway, if you were aming for realism, the face could use a little improvement, specially in the nose-mouth triengle and the jaw. If it was menat to be that way, then cool style!

Now, the torso could definitely use some study.

That said, great work, dude! Great composition

This was all done digitally, I see what you mean about the nose mouth and chin area, Although I was not going for 100% realism I did want it to look accurate. The stomach area was my most difficult area that I worked on and I know I REALLY need to work on that and just my anatomy in general. Thanks for the feedback, I will keep it in mind when I revisit this.

hey there dark,

like you said, the biggest issue here would be the general anatomy. his waist and hips are very femenine. i made a quick paintover with some minor suggestions

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