Crimson Daggers — Art forum

Hey guys,
Which version is better?
Supposed to be a game background (like a disciples 2 battleground background but for a younger age range).

Of course any and ALL crit is very much appreciated, but I'm mainly interested in light and color matters over design.

Bunch of thanks.
Everybody rock on!

P.S.
In the crit section are we supposed to create new threads or just update the old ones? Thanks again.

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Hey lake7less

You've got some perspective issues the floor and in the background.
Also the two stairs make a weird cut in the edge of the picture.
If you really need them in the picture, try and find a better way to incorporate them into it.

Hope that helps! :-)

Does help, much obliged.
Good points.

The background thing was me going for a curved horizon line to suggest the castle is placed somewhere ridiculously high up. Maybe placing clouds up the window between the castle and the landscape could push that.

Thanks for crittin'.