crit please ! - Printable Version +- Crimson Daggers — Art forum (//crimsondaggers.com/forum) +-- Forum: PERSONAL ARTWORK (//crimsondaggers.com/forum/forum-9.html) +--- Forum: SEEKING CRITIQUE/PAINTOVERS (//crimsondaggers.com/forum/forum-36.html) +--- Thread: crit please ! (/thread-1091.html)

crit please ! - gumby - 07-07-2012 Hello ! Id like to get some critique to push this piece further. Im not really happy with it at the moment. Thanks ! RE: crit please ! - benjaminbach - 07-09-2012 Problemareas and paintover. Basicly you should push the "depth" in it a bit more. And being more precise in your renderingstyle and less loose would make the picture more tight. Also, I'd leave out the plants and fix the perspective a little :) try make a separate layer w. your vanishing point etc. Hope it helps /B RE: crit please ! - gumby - 07-09-2012 thank you thats actually really helpfull ! here is an update ! [img][/img]