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Bloodsports critique - donnguyenart - 03-23-2013 Hey everybody, I did this piece for bloodsports and I'm putting it up for everybody in the community to give me critiques/suggestions. RE: Bloodsports critique - ChantalFournier - 03-24-2013 OMG, the demon guy is eating the shooter's head! Hehe. Ok, cool sepia/beige thing going on, except that one of the main center of interest (the shooter) is beige too so he fades in the bg a little too much. Also, this is a very weird awkward pose to bend both legs evenly like that, he looks like he will fall back anytime now. Get good references, act out the pose to get a feel of what he is doing. The skull at the front has a problem, it's like we see the back of his head but the side of his jaw. Oh and that demon eating his head tangent is a very big problem. Unless you mean it to be a joke. RE: Bloodsports critique - donnguyenart - 03-24-2013 Thanks for the critique!