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Critique/Paintover apreciated - jackjones - 04-23-2013
I feel like I have done my best on this image and would like some fedback so I can Improve
RE: Critique/Paintover apreciated - JabyReART - 04-23-2013
I will try to play with the warm/cold thing and add some enviro to make it more vibrant. Also the warm/cold lights will play with the armour giving it more sense as a whole...its a start...roughly I show you this in my paintover, hope it helps!
Keep drawing!
RE: Critique/Paintover apreciated - Heavenwill - 04-24-2013
Hey Jack, here is a quick paintover, I tried to bring out the form more and built up on the lighting you had. Think about where the light is and the form it hits. The comp is a bit empty too, I added guns very quickly just to give you an idea of where you can go next
RE: Critique/Paintover apreciated - jackjones - 04-24-2013
Ok thanks guys I will try and work on this thanks allot for the info
RE: Critique/Paintover apreciated - Mike086 - 04-24-2013
Jack,
I livestreamed my paint over, you can watch it here: http://www.livestream.com/mciii
I go over the changes I made and why.
RE: Critique/Paintover apreciated - jackjones - 04-25-2013
(04-24-2013, 11:57 PM)Mike086 Wrote: Jack,Thanks for taking the time for that stream I it found very helpful. :)
I livestreamed my paint over, you can watch it here: http://www.livestream.com/mciii
I go over the changes I made and why.