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Some critique is nice. - RealityFix - 11-11-2013 Something recently finished: Any pointers would be great on how to improve upon it. I'll probably rework it a bit after I'm done a few other projects. RE: Some critique is nice. - Kaffer - 11-12-2013 I think the composition is a bit heavy on the left side - something to the right to balance it might be something to think about.. I love the rendering on the sky and the city! RE: Some critique is nice. - RealityFix - 11-12-2013 Ah thanks, the composition is something that needs to be fixed up. I got some good critique on reddit as well on it so every bit helps! RE: Some critique is nice. - darktiste - 11-14-2013 like Kaffer mentioned heavy on the left. Good use of scale and superposition if you need to re-study some aspect of composition here is a link: http://ctrlpaint.com/library see 4) Composition Basics