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Need fresh eyes - Elmst - 06-12-2014
I realize I am pretty far on this piece but I could really use some fresh eyes on this piece. Any suggestions on light, shadow and or color would greatly be appreciated.
Thanks for your time.
RE: Need fresh eyes - Elmst - 06-14-2014
Posted finished piece in the final work section here on Crimson Daggers.
RE: Need fresh eyes - Wardy - 06-14-2014
did you still want any crit or are you happy to let it rest? nice work btw :)
RE: Need fresh eyes - Elmst - 06-14-2014
Thanks Wardy,
I do believe it is time to put this to rest. But on the other side of things if you have an idea of how I could push this piece it would be a great learning experience for the next piece:)
Eric
RE: Need fresh eyes - Wardy - 06-15-2014
yeah its a great piece, i see why you'd want to.
all I was going to say is that its hard to see what level the attacker is on, his fist is making a tangent with the main hulk guy's arm, which makes it seem a bit awkward. if i was me, i'd have him top right foreground jumping towards him, to make it a bit more dynamic.
that said, the rendering on this is excellent, and youve made a piece packed with energy so you should feel very happy with it. so final thought- mind tangents and maybe spread the action over more layers- all of it is happening on one plane at the moment.
hope it helps for your next piece, great work.
RE: Need fresh eyes - Elmst - 06-16-2014
Great crit Wardy! I will keep that in mind on the next piece. Sometimes I feel like I need a check list.
Tangents. Check
Fore ground, middle ground, back ground. Check
Value. Check
And so on.
Thanks again Wardy, I will be sure to place the next piece up earlier for crit.