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Greasy Spoon - Psychotime - 09-04-2014 Attempt at an environment, would like some critique so as to make the next one better. Got some critique from elsewhere and made some edits. RE: Greasy Spoon - meat - 09-09-2014 Hey it looks nicer already! You can also consider adding some city ground smoke - y'know the smokes coming out of drain hole covers like you often see in New York city shots. Also the ground is very clean for that area, I'd imagine it be more trash, especially it's a food-dispensing site.