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Waterfall Observatory feedback - Patrick Gaumond - 11-20-2014

Hey duuuudes and duuuudettes

Currently working on this piece and am looking for feedback before I push it into colour and final rendering! Any feedback is welcome, not looking for any one thing in particular. I do know that my values tend to be very midtoned, which i have a feeling they are here again, so should the shadows be a bit darker? I don't want too much white/super high contrast though, but I'm feeling the shadows are a bit too light

I'm going for my usual landscape style which leans a bit more toward stylization than realism

Thanks!

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RE: Waterfall Observatory feedback - Matt C - 11-20-2014

Remember to separate your values into two (or three) clear areas. Each should contain a narrow value range of its own . Right now you're looking good, I think you might want to push the sky a little brighter and the island/rocky crag behind it a little darker.