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Guile Crit - modblot - 07-11-2015
I'm working on a picture of Guile from Street Fighter. I have worked on several sketches and I'm pretty happy with the latest one in terms of posing but I think I could use a crit on lighting, or anything you might see wrong with this picture so far.
Be as direct as you want, I can take it.
Thanks in advice!
RE: Guile Crit - Lodratio - 07-24-2015
First paintover, so tell me if there's anything I should be doing differently, be it with the painting or the explanation.
The lighting in this was pretty weird. I couldn't really figure out where it was coming from, but I think it works so whatever.
I tried to make use of lost and soft edges to make Guile look less 'cut out', changed the way the torso was bent so it implies that he's standing in a way that makes sense. The hands looked too square-ish to me, but I think the way I went about correcting that ended up fucking up the right one instead. Lastly, I made the angle of the face and the angle of the hair match up and changed the placement of the ear.
RE: Guile Crit - dodeqaa - 07-25-2015
Hey there,
Some ideas you can try using to push your lighting further :)
Keep truckin'