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smrr's CC 2 | - smrr - 04-05-2016

'Sup!

I've chosen HENRY THE CROW to be my muse for this challenge.
CC2 seems to be more focused on creating a killer keyframe illustration, as opposed to designing a fully realised new character design, in most ways.

So last time I failed on nailing the mood and feel of the IP, so this time 'round - I'm gonna make bloody sure I nail the look and feel of Bloodborne!

I plan to do a lot of studies this time around and start a lot earlier that last time as well.

On my to do list - some more pencil studies to build visual library of Bloodborne weaps/beasts, architecture (I seem to retain more design information by doing pencil renderings, also, changing things up really changes the way you think... up)

*Mood studies x style tests
*Possible material studies
*Nail a comp by the end of the week

Beastmode/claw study:


Eileen the Crow study


applying - thinking about comps and narrative



Let's get it Dagz o/


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - slash razor - 04-05-2016

hey smrr very nice pencil work, yea Im with you starting from pencil, just feels more free flowing, great start....


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - Amit Dutta - 04-05-2016

Ok I'm breaking my wip silence. Goddamit, those are great, you better translate all that good shit into the final, is all I'm gonna say. Peace! :)


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - Triggerpigking - 04-05-2016

Awesome stuff smrr! already liking the application.
have you played bloodborne by any chance?


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - Jan Kloidt - 04-05-2016

niiiice! I should do some of these too!


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - Berebobe - 04-05-2016

Those pencil strokes on the Eileen the crow study are beautiful. It would be cool to see the final done in pencil too; I think that could be awesome!


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - crackedskull - 04-05-2016

Sick sketches and studies, keep it up, I wanna see those characters in action.


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - neopatogen - 04-06-2016

Awesome, you're so good at pencil sketching!! Do you have some fully rendered pencil stuff? Would be great to have a look! Haven't read the story on the story on the last sketch, it's a bit hard to read, hope to see it (or other story) translated into your keyframe illustration!


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - Eyliana - 04-06-2016

That are some really nice sketches and sketchy strokes. Can't wait to see more :)


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - BrushNoir - 04-06-2016

Sick... You have some nice traditional skills!


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - Lodratio - 04-06-2016

Your linequality is very, very good. If you ever happen to feel like doing a full-blown traditional illustration I'd love to see that.


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - smrr - 04-09-2016

Holy actual flying gazelle o_o! Thank you all for popping in  Sun Sun 4e5dd44a 

Lodratio - Thanks, Lod <3 haha I'd never thought about it actually! maybe I should consider it

BrushNoir - You're sick! cheers, Noir!

Eyliana - Cheers, Eyliana o/ ! too kind!

neopatogen - Too kind neo! Thank you! Sadly, I don't (yet at least), I've been more focused on building my first portfolio this year :( oh yeah, they're just notes I jotted down from a couple vids n_n defs will be translated into the final o/

crackedskull - thanks kindly cracked <3 you will soon enough!

Berebobe - Haha too bad I'm too much of a pussssssyyyy  Silent perhaps for one of these Crucibles ;) thank you, Berebobe!

Jan Kloidt - You shooooooould bro hnnng <3 owait, no no, nvm, you're already kicking multiple butts with your digital studies >:o 
Triggerpigking - Thank ya Trigger :) I sure haven't (but after all the Let's Plays and vids I've seen... I want. To play it. SO BADLY. MY EYES ARE GONNA POP OUT! DDD: !!! )

Amit Dutta - Amit! You're too kind! Cheers man o/ yeah, I'll make sure of it, the crits I got from CC1 have been burned into my brain... I'll be traumatised if I make the same mistakes twice... to say the least

slash razor - Hey thanks slash <3! Exaaaactly! Pencils are the best, I'm glad you share the same sentiments <:
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Honestly haven't been fully committing all of my time to CC2, but at the same time - I have? More passive thinking about the challenge than anything and writing notes (not shown). Still roughing out an idea/compo I'm happy with in my head, these studies are both just getting ideas on paper as well as things I need to study (e.g. mood studies, muscles in the face. Side note: actually, it's funny, in all my years of studying art, I never considered really studying the muscles in the face lmao. I didn't think it was necessary... *facepalms* I can be real daft sometimes, I swear)

Still need to finalise a comp/idea.
Hmm.
Oh and do some style tests tbh.
Indeed, hmm.

Some more design studies (yeah the persp is off with the architecture study, but bleh), anatomy studies too - you'll see some weird-ass study of a yoga (bakasana/crow) pose - it was an idea I was toying with. When I work on compos, I'll consider it or scrap it. 






applying said pose from above to a sketch (unfinished, ofc lel)


and some mood studies



Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm...


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - Adam Lina - 04-09-2016

I like this. Your faces are getting better and better!


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - smrr - 04-16-2016

Adam - thanks bumhead :D

I haven't been updating my wip thread because well, I've been failing a LOT. I had a previous design (and thumbnails on my phone, but due to my bro upgrading my phone I lost all those anyway lol) but I scrapped the shit outta it because I realised I was over complicating it!! 
Like forreal.

So anyway, here's a roooooough wip :D 


and some of the comps that got me here


I set a deadline to finish design lines by 3pm then really get into it ;)

I'm really excited and nervous, as usual

Let's go hard <3


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - Adam Lina - 04-16-2016

Bumhead? Words hurt ya know? ooooo fancy perspective.


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - smrr - 04-16-2016

Adam - HAHA says the racist :D jks ily man -- yasss perspective

update yo

giving myself mini deadlines to get this done y'know!?
rough lines complete by 1500? check.




RE: smrr's CC 2 | - Jan Kloidt - 04-17-2016

lookin good! keep working, you got this :)


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - Legion Brewer - 04-17-2016

Wow, this looks dynamic, awesome job! Somehow I missed all the sketches and studies you did too. Love those traditional sketches. You've definitely put a lot of time into this one.


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - BrushNoir - 04-22-2016

Dynamic indeed, finish it :D


RE: smrr's CC 2 | - smrr - 04-23-2016

Cheers guys <3 <3 <3!

Hey, so, I underestimated my family yesterday on my bday... they did in fact drag me out of the house. Soooooo I didn't manage to finish it. However, when I got home, I looked at it and changed a bunch of things lel. Just as well I do still have a day to focus in and get to it to fix this mess I've made.

I'm disappointed in my process -- not as much as the last -- but, still, disappointed. Because if I actually knew what I was seeking, well we wouldn't be having this conversation, 'cause I'd be finished with this challenge haha. I blame this on lack of study/experimentation prior to CC2 :l

Alrighty, let's try to fix this mess before having to stay up 'til dastardly hours >_> (never again lmao)



(yeah it's really dark atm, will fix)