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help with the overall project - loganwilliams - 01-13-2021

I don't know if you just need the .psd or the .jpg but here is the .jpg. this drawing is from one of the challenges on this site. the creature generator. I would love a critique on my piece.



RE: help with the overall project - darktiste - 01-13-2021

It dark value on dark value for me which doesn't make this read sucessful.I also i am not a fan of the camera angle either we have no indication if in water or on the ground so the background is a problem to.Also it kinda big in size so it would be interesting to see element you could incorporate to help us get a better sense of the object inside your image.

I do like the texture on it skin i gotta say.


RE: help with the overall project - loganwilliams - 01-13-2021

(01-13-2021, 05:58 AM)darktiste Wrote: It dark value on dark value for me which doesn't make this read sucessful.I also i am not a fan of the camera angle either we have no indication if in water or on the ground so the background is a problem to.Also it kinda big in size so it would be interesting to see element you could incorporate to help use get a better sense of the object inside your image.

I do like the texture on it skin i gotta say.
thank you for the feedback.