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feedback pleeease - RobinDoesSomething - 07-17-2025
Hey, sorry if i make any mistakes, i`m kinda new to this site.
I´m looking for a bit of feedback regarding this image. Everything you might find would be helpfull. Line art, conception, ideas for the background and so on. I started drawing relative recently (about 2 years ago, from time to time) and am pretty insecure about my drawings. So please be direct, thanks.
RE: feedback pleeease - Maxilla - 07-17-2025
Hi! Welcome to the forums! :D
For the piece, it's quite hard to read what is what. The lines are a bit messy and I think you could work on making sure each silhouette or element of the drawing reads better. I can sort of see and understand that his hand is on her back, and that he's reaching out for the bottle but the forshortening is quite unclear so thats' where I would put focus on.
It's a nice sketch, but that's where I would develop it further. Her head also seems quite large or maybe it's the hair that makes it feel that way. If she has a lot of volume to the hair, I would make the crown a lot smaller so it doesn't look like her head is quite so big.
Keep us posted! :D