Struggling with composition
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I would suggest you to make the character smaller so it doesn't cut into the cape and the bow.Also Im no bow expert but there should be a rope tied to both ends of it no ?Lol jk. That aside I think you should concentrate on establishing light sources and values rather than the composition since this seems to be strictly a character piece ,rather than a scene of some sorts .You can add some trees in the back that lead the eye back in the character rather than the bow leading it out of frame.Other than that keep working on it.

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Struggling with composition - by Neal_Albert - 05-19-2013, 08:58 PM
RE: Struggling with composition - by Neal_Albert - 05-20-2013, 05:35 AM
RE: Struggling with composition - by Rindoukan - 05-20-2013, 06:12 AM
RE: Struggling with composition - by Neal_Albert - 05-20-2013, 06:31 AM
RE: Struggling with composition - by Neal_Albert - 05-21-2013, 03:11 AM

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