02-24-2019, 07:32 PM
Lots of solid work Fedo, wanted to add a crit as well if you don't mind.Currently your values are a bit "blown out" or i guess the correct term would be overexposed, what i did is lower them with the curve tool in photoshop. also i corrected the perspective on the buildings,using the path tool i located a single vanishing point on top beyond the canvas and drew lines that way the buildings will feel parallel.Also what Amit sed about the cast shadows a good way to see this effect is to take a stick and cast a shadow on your arm, you will see that cast shadows follow form and i expanded the canvas a bit to the left so that she will be on the third, but also because right now her arm is hugging the edge of the frame a bit so feels almost like a tangent. And one last thing the arrows on the drapery, the face is the focal point so have as many things pointing towards it as possible, nothing is accidental in art so try to make every element serve the picture as much as possible. Other than these few small things looking good, if you keep fixing and working on this piece i think a really solid painting can come out, just don't give up on it and keep fixing it until it matches your vision!