Olaaaaaf!
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Haha, you're gonna start hating me after this is done. I think the shift to the old arm changes the gesture for the better, but that arm is messing up the silhouette, I was imagining something inbetween maybe? I'd do a quick paintover, but I'm at the day job atm.

I like the diagonal flow, but I was thinking that I really liked the big foreground dude overlapping Olaf's arm. It really added depth to the piece, so keep him in where he was and maybe make that other dude on the left bigger or shift him a bit higher in the comp. you could also use things like outstretched arms shielding from the coming blow, spears, swords etc, to add some diagonals that point from that left and bottom edge towards the main focal point.

Or you could also use a background shape moving diagonally through the comp, top left to mid/bottom right, like the side of a ship, that he is jumping off to add narrative and push the diagonals even more!

Also, this reminded me of something if you wanted to try some humour :) . Can just imagine Olaf leaping backwards into a crowd of nasties with his arms crossed wielding the axe and an evil bloodthirsty grin on his face :)

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Olaaaaaf! - by Vandall - 10-14-2014, 11:57 PM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Amit Dutta - 10-15-2014, 08:26 AM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Vandall - 10-15-2014, 12:41 PM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Amit Dutta - 10-15-2014, 12:52 PM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Vandall - 10-15-2014, 01:01 PM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Vandall - 10-15-2014, 03:04 PM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Amit Dutta - 10-15-2014, 04:35 PM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Vandall - 10-15-2014, 11:11 PM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Amit Dutta - 10-16-2014, 03:55 AM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Psychotime - 10-16-2014, 06:33 AM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Vandall - 10-16-2014, 08:43 AM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Amit Dutta - 10-16-2014, 10:16 AM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Vandall - 10-16-2014, 01:02 PM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Vandall - 10-16-2014, 07:58 PM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Amit Dutta - 10-16-2014, 08:45 PM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Vandall - 10-16-2014, 08:51 PM
RE: Olaaaaaf! - by Amit Dutta - 10-16-2014, 09:06 PM

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