THE CRIMSON CADAVERS
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Hey! Looks good, man! Good to have you in the group!  

So I've got some anatomy critiques. It may sound nit-picky but hopefully it's helpful :) 

I think you should try and separate the muscles a bit. Simpler drawings tend to be easier to work with.

It looks like you're giving certain muscles a bit too much volume. The posterior head of the deltoid is mostly tendon and starts to get actual fibres when it groups with the head of the deltoid. So where it attaches to the scapula, it's just flat tendon. 
The latissimus dorsi is really flat and doesn't have much volume to it. On your drawing it looks like part of its origin is with the serratus anterior and external oblique. Its actual origin is the iliac, (lower) thoracic and lumbar vertebra. 
The lower part of the trapesious is also very flat and where it attaches to the thoracic vertebra. 
The external oblique starts at the iliac and goes all the way to the front where it meets the rectus abdominis. It inserts at the lower ribs on the back so the further forward you go, the more it takes on a backwards direction rather than everything going straight up. 

All muscles have an origin and an insertion. A beginning and an end. when you know these two areas, you can confidently draw the muscle as a nice clean form on the body. If you're not aware of these origins and insertions, it can get really confusing really fast. 

Hope it helps and doesn't sound like gibberish ^^ 


Here's a quick anatomy drawing. Didn't have a lot of time today because I'm dealing with my future living arrangements when studying at the atelier 



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