The Velvet Revolvers

[JavierP]

Finally Finished this dude. Now, to plan what's next.  C&C welcomed!

Hi Jeso,
First I'd like to say thanks for starting this group. It's helping people already. In the interest of keeping that going, I'd like to offer a crit.
I really like the execution and design of the armor in this piece, but I feel that some anatomy issues are holding the image back from being the best that it can be. Most notably the length of his neck and the placement of his features, in perspective, on his face. I realize that the figure is stylized, but the inconsistencies in the drawing make the character seem strange to me.
I also think that giving him a definite expression would also tell us more about him as a character, and subsequently add more interest to the image itself. I made a small drawing to show you what I mean. Hope this helps and keep up the great work.