10-07-2015, 05:56 AM
From what I can see, you've got a good eye for the composition-- The only thing really missing here is the structure.
There are some anatomical problems with the head, hands, and the leg (I think that the way the light is hitting that knee is making it look a bit too twisted towards us).
I think that if you can refine and restructure where necessary, paying attention to creating accurate structures underneath the figure, this is going to be a really stunning piece.
Good luck!
There are some anatomical problems with the head, hands, and the leg (I think that the way the light is hitting that knee is making it look a bit too twisted towards us).
I think that if you can refine and restructure where necessary, paying attention to creating accurate structures underneath the figure, this is going to be a really stunning piece.
Good luck!