12-31-2015, 06:45 PM
Hi guys,
this is an attempt to create an fantasy illustration of an barbarian and his animalcompanion for my portfolio.
It feels like the overal composition and values aren´t readable enough and I got problem to make sense of the fur on the bear and the shouldercloak of the barbarian (maybe leave the cloak out for a better read?).
I´d really love to push this further, but don´t know how to do this without just redoing the whole values.
Tipps and tricks how to improve the values and composition would be awesome.
this is an attempt to create an fantasy illustration of an barbarian and his animalcompanion for my portfolio.
It feels like the overal composition and values aren´t readable enough and I got problem to make sense of the fur on the bear and the shouldercloak of the barbarian (maybe leave the cloak out for a better read?).
I´d really love to push this further, but don´t know how to do this without just redoing the whole values.
Tipps and tricks how to improve the values and composition would be awesome.