vampire trap
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I like the composition and colors you are using so far. I can't really tell what the mass of stuff to the right is. I think it's trash but I'm not sure. If it's a dirty alley you should probably put some trash everywhere.

The character closest to us, her legs don't look correct. You need to move the feet to the left so they are underneath her.

I hope to see this with some more time put into it. Looks like you have a cool start.

Good job!

Pete
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vampire trap - by gangstershit - 03-20-2012, 03:57 PM
RE: vampire trap - by Piotr Jasielski - 03-20-2012, 09:44 PM
RE: vampire trap - by gangstershit - 03-21-2012, 07:52 AM
RE: vampire trap - by Piotr Jasielski - 03-22-2012, 04:48 AM
RE: vampire trap - by Hirgonn - 04-12-2012, 04:06 AM

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