06-24-2016, 04:23 AM
hey Jonny! it looks really good, cant wait to see the final. Personally I think the third panel is fine I understood the context... and it becomes more obvious once you read the rest of the panels. as for the second row with the judge, I agree with the text. It feels a bit awkward to me. I would just recommend just trying different things out. maybe try it across the bottom of the panel, or maybe the judge could be saying it "No decent role models... peer pressure and using hard drugs... GUILTY!". I dunno just pushing some ideas around. hope some of that helped, and im looking forward to seeing the final!