04-25-2021, 05:55 AM
You got some interesting style for characters. I'm guessing the proportions are intentional.
You mentioned in the first post searching for feedback. First thing I notice is you sometimes got tendency to crop the full characters very tight. Like the feet and the top of the head are very close to the edge of the painting which makes it feel a bit claustrofobic. Also sometimes you make and illustration where the main object is placed somewhere on the side but there is no shape to balance it out on the other side (or it's very faint). Doing more thumbnails would help with those type of compositional problems.
Other thing I sometimes see is you got core shadows very flat because they don't have any reflected light in them. Adding even very subtle one would make the even stronger form.
Hope it gives you some new directions to improve.
Keep it up :).
You mentioned in the first post searching for feedback. First thing I notice is you sometimes got tendency to crop the full characters very tight. Like the feet and the top of the head are very close to the edge of the painting which makes it feel a bit claustrofobic. Also sometimes you make and illustration where the main object is placed somewhere on the side but there is no shape to balance it out on the other side (or it's very faint). Doing more thumbnails would help with those type of compositional problems.
Other thing I sometimes see is you got core shadows very flat because they don't have any reflected light in them. Adding even very subtle one would make the even stronger form.
Hope it gives you some new directions to improve.
Keep it up :).