02-20-2014, 01:04 PM
ooh nice work on the comic, looking forward to seeing more of it, there's a small typo in the first dialogue box, you spelt usual as asual aside from that all looks pretty well written to me.
As for the panels themselves, I think you should just keep experimenting with it in black and white but try to color it anyways might look good and just as a random idea maybe have some of the pictures pop out of the panels, one of my favorite manga artists Kouta Hirano does that and I think it makes it feel more alive.
http://m.mhcdn.net/store/manga/40/065.0/...1194758403 http://i3.mangareader.net/hellsing/50/he...318503.jpg
As for the panels themselves, I think you should just keep experimenting with it in black and white but try to color it anyways might look good and just as a random idea maybe have some of the pictures pop out of the panels, one of my favorite manga artists Kouta Hirano does that and I think it makes it feel more alive.
http://m.mhcdn.net/store/manga/40/065.0/...1194758403 http://i3.mangareader.net/hellsing/50/he...318503.jpg