05-11-2014, 12:01 AM
Really like your usage of lines and conveying emotions through certain stormy ways(I dont know how to say it srry)
Like in page 16, when the guy freaks out, you made an awesome effect with covering half his face with black.
Interesting plot so far, not what I expected, but liking it nonetheless.
Like in page 16, when the guy freaks out, you made an awesome effect with covering half his face with black.
Interesting plot so far, not what I expected, but liking it nonetheless.