05-14-2014, 07:58 AM
Nice work on the studies mate.
Just a tiny thing about the dialogue in the last comic page.
In the first panel she says "I think we have started on the wrong feet",
it should probbly be "I think we started on the wrong foot" also getting rid of the "have" because it makes her sound a bit robotic and unnatural.
Alright done unleashing my inner grammer nazi :P, comic's continuing to get better man and despite a few tiny slip ups like that, the writing's great.
Just a tiny thing about the dialogue in the last comic page.
In the first panel she says "I think we have started on the wrong feet",
it should probbly be "I think we started on the wrong foot" also getting rid of the "have" because it makes her sound a bit robotic and unnatural.
Alright done unleashing my inner grammer nazi :P, comic's continuing to get better man and despite a few tiny slip ups like that, the writing's great.