02-07-2015, 11:16 AM
Hey nice work man, just looked up Yoshitoshi Abe, his work is awesome I recognized it from texhnolyze but i'd never bothered to look his stuff up till now.
Anyway the girl looks pretty good I think, reminds me a bit of that rainfall picture you did a while back.
I think the head and upper torso looks great anatomically, head looks a bit too big though even for anime standards, the hips seem fine to me, I think there might be something a bit off there but I can't figure out what it is.
I think the biggest problem would be that left arm, it looks way too skinny and I don't think it looks like it connects to the shoulder and pectoralis right.
Hope this helps :)
Anyway the girl looks pretty good I think, reminds me a bit of that rainfall picture you did a while back.
I think the head and upper torso looks great anatomically, head looks a bit too big though even for anime standards, the hips seem fine to me, I think there might be something a bit off there but I can't figure out what it is.
I think the biggest problem would be that left arm, it looks way too skinny and I don't think it looks like it connects to the shoulder and pectoralis right.
Hope this helps :)