12-12-2012, 08:33 PM
Hey Ursula, I just went trough ur sketchbook and man did I like it, I love how dynamic ur drawings are, the line style is great and the anatomy and portraits are really great too.
I also like your paintings though I think that some of them became a bit too stiff for the really nice style that u have.
I'll give an example of what I mean: In the boss fight scene from the Zelda universe - the sketch has some simple and flowy lines but then the painting gets too unfocused with the many details allover(which also have a general fuzyiness that doesnt help) and I maybe the blacks are a bit too much.
One other thing that caught my eye were the eyes on the zerling queen, the whole painting works pretty well exept they eyes. The frist portrait from your sketchbook has a really great focus on the eyes and some sharper highlights and clearer irises(+maybe noseline) would help this painting too.
Hope this helps.
Congrats on the great job ur doing and waiting ot see more:)
I also like your paintings though I think that some of them became a bit too stiff for the really nice style that u have.
I'll give an example of what I mean: In the boss fight scene from the Zelda universe - the sketch has some simple and flowy lines but then the painting gets too unfocused with the many details allover(which also have a general fuzyiness that doesnt help) and I maybe the blacks are a bit too much.
One other thing that caught my eye were the eyes on the zerling queen, the whole painting works pretty well exept they eyes. The frist portrait from your sketchbook has a really great focus on the eyes and some sharper highlights and clearer irises(+maybe noseline) would help this painting too.
Hope this helps.
Congrats on the great job ur doing and waiting ot see more:)