Elderscrollers Sketchy Stuff

[Nature]

I applaud your ability to paint complete scenes, with characters in environments. You have good ideas and are evidently pretty decent at drawing, however there's a couple things that are really holding you back.

Lack of strong, readable shadow shapes in your figures. In most areas of your paintings, light and shadow just blend together because your the edges of your shadows are mostly so blurry and vague, and there isn't much contrast in value/hue between the shadow and light. Most of your figures look evenly lit and flat. Focus on creating a separation in light and dark so that the difference is clear when you squint at your painting.

Your brushwork could be improved a lot. It looks like you rely too much on the soft round to make shadows and transitions in values, I think this leads to muddy colors and flattening of the figures. But when its apparent you do use a hard round brush, it seems like you use one that's too small and the strokes looks too streaky and stringy. I think you just need to clean up how you define your edges from soft to hard and smooth out how you blend colors.

Examine this piece by Zeen Chin, I think it illustrates what I mean pretty well.