06-29-2016, 10:09 AM
Hey, Fedodika. I looked at your dA and I think the primary issue that I see is light and form. The soft edge brush prevents you from doing convincing, dramatic shadows that show off form like Michael Hampton does here: http://www.figuredrawing.info/wordpress2...ng/h04.jpg
Basically you have cast shadows in your images, but you're shading them like form shadows. I bet if you go for dramatic lighting, sharpen cast shadows, and use them to describe form you'll see an improvement straight away.
The other thing is form/structure. When you draw something it really is best to have some idea of perspective, planes, 3d... I'd suggest more structural drawing. Your faces will start to turn out better when you make them out of 3d building blocks.
Basically you have cast shadows in your images, but you're shading them like form shadows. I bet if you go for dramatic lighting, sharpen cast shadows, and use them to describe form you'll see an improvement straight away.
The other thing is form/structure. When you draw something it really is best to have some idea of perspective, planes, 3d... I'd suggest more structural drawing. Your faces will start to turn out better when you make them out of 3d building blocks.