07-10-2017, 02:51 AM
This is pretty sick! It has a really epic feeling to it :) For the face I think the lips are a bit too wide although i guess you could be going for a real sinister look. The lips are wrapping around the face which is good but it should be placed onto the denture sphere and like a bit poking out. Seems a bit flat right now and there are some shadows/shading missing around the mouth area and the corners of the mouth. As the pupils get farther away from the center they become a bit elliptical. I'm not sure I would double check the pupil placement. Also the perspective is confusing, correct me if I'm wrong but we are looking up at her right? Some things read as if we were looking straight on at her. I really like this piece though :D keep it up! Is there a story behind this character? Seems pretty cool!