09-25-2017, 03:50 PM
Hey Feds.
Really great to see the consistent work you're putting in.
Something I've been curious about for a while is how quickly you work, and how much time you spend on each individual drawing. I hope you don't take offence to this, but your lines often appear kind of wispy. Perhaps because of the speed that you work at. It appears to me as if you know the general direction, but can't quite pick out the specifics, if that makes sense.
If I may quote Bridgman here
"The eye in drawing much follow a line or a plane or a mass. In the process of drawing, this may become a moving line, or a moving plane, or a moving mass. The line, in actual construction, must come first; but as mental construction must precede physical, so the concept of mass must come first, that of plane second, that of line last.
Think in masses, define them in lines."
This may be a bit of a non issue for you, since these are learning drawings, but I find some of these very visually confusing; With so many lines the specifics become a little unintelligible.
Keep up the great work!
Really great to see the consistent work you're putting in.
Something I've been curious about for a while is how quickly you work, and how much time you spend on each individual drawing. I hope you don't take offence to this, but your lines often appear kind of wispy. Perhaps because of the speed that you work at. It appears to me as if you know the general direction, but can't quite pick out the specifics, if that makes sense.
If I may quote Bridgman here
"The eye in drawing much follow a line or a plane or a mass. In the process of drawing, this may become a moving line, or a moving plane, or a moving mass. The line, in actual construction, must come first; but as mental construction must precede physical, so the concept of mass must come first, that of plane second, that of line last.
Think in masses, define them in lines."
This may be a bit of a non issue for you, since these are learning drawings, but I find some of these very visually confusing; With so many lines the specifics become a little unintelligible.
Keep up the great work!