02-14-2019, 09:49 AM
Hello! Well done on your study, Fed. Just a couple of quick pointers:
- The value of her top feels way too intense for the lighting scenario and overall image. The shading is also pretty messy and blurry (closer to the neck) compared to everything else
- Her lips feel like they are protruding off of her face. This is mainly because the shadows on the philtrum has been pushed too far forwards.
- I know the face holds more pink tones than the body, but the neck and face are too different in colour.
Hope that helps some. Just things to keep in mind for the next study :)
- The value of her top feels way too intense for the lighting scenario and overall image. The shading is also pretty messy and blurry (closer to the neck) compared to everything else
- Her lips feel like they are protruding off of her face. This is mainly because the shadows on the philtrum has been pushed too far forwards.
- I know the face holds more pink tones than the body, but the neck and face are too different in colour.
Hope that helps some. Just things to keep in mind for the next study :)