Fedodika the Koala

[darktiste]

I think you could make it work but i feel like there a unbalance of visual weight on the right side of the image.It a really challenging thing to do a low angle composition like this.I feel like you need to use the background to renforce what you already have.Try to create story behind most of the element to renforce the composition and harmonize the piece.Also try to distribute your visual weight so that the element don't compete against one and other but instead create a rythme for the eye to follow using the principle of big, medium, small and alternace of value to to move the eye around while controlling the amount of detail to create the transition.

I think one of the thing that need clarification is she inside or outside.

I don't think it would hurt to watch again if you didn't already the ctrl paint video on composition

https://www.ctrlpaint.com/library

The section is 4)Composition basic sound basic but it harder when you have to combine multiple fundamental and remind to keep those principle in check since there much more abstract meaning that they don't directly affect the believablity of the piece but rather the effectiveness of the delivery.

If you wish you can probably learn how to apply the principle to study with the composition study i did a while back.I encourage you to do similar study with the work of an artist of your choose.It will help you solidify and than transfer those knowledge into your painting.

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3...ge-11.html