11-18-2019, 04:09 PM
A few things about the Chloe face that hopefully can help:
- Sometimes you make her face wider than it is. The 1st image top of page (not shaded) the proportions are pretty good, but in other attempts her face is wider than what it should be. Her face is basically a (quite thin) upside down egg and her hair is quite flat and close to her skull. Pushing this elongated look of her face will help it look more like her.
- Your missing a lot of perspective on her glasses - they go down and taper in a lot more
- It's a lot better in your most recent attempt but she actually has a very thin top lip. It's also pretty flat in shape and doesn't have any real definition (y'know how sometimes in the bottom middle of the top lips people have a defined ball shape part, she lacks that)
I hope that helps in some way, Fed! Portraits are very difficult because even if you have proportions down pat, it's a lot of tiny nuances that make the person look like they do :) Keep on going man :)
- Sometimes you make her face wider than it is. The 1st image top of page (not shaded) the proportions are pretty good, but in other attempts her face is wider than what it should be. Her face is basically a (quite thin) upside down egg and her hair is quite flat and close to her skull. Pushing this elongated look of her face will help it look more like her.
- Your missing a lot of perspective on her glasses - they go down and taper in a lot more
- It's a lot better in your most recent attempt but she actually has a very thin top lip. It's also pretty flat in shape and doesn't have any real definition (y'know how sometimes in the bottom middle of the top lips people have a defined ball shape part, she lacks that)
I hope that helps in some way, Fed! Portraits are very difficult because even if you have proportions down pat, it's a lot of tiny nuances that make the person look like they do :) Keep on going man :)