06-13-2014, 08:34 AM
Good effort on these studies. The still life you did especially shows improvement with how you are picking up on things like bounce light.
One quick thing, watch out for the proportions on the master study - her body looks ok, but her head is much bigger than the original (and the tilt isn't deep enough). It might help look at the negative space her head forms with the edge of the canvas as well as relative to her body to keep on top of it.
One quick thing, watch out for the proportions on the master study - her body looks ok, but her head is much bigger than the original (and the tilt isn't deep enough). It might help look at the negative space her head forms with the edge of the canvas as well as relative to her body to keep on top of it.