04-08-2015, 11:02 PM
Hey man getting heaps better! Solid effort on that last piece. Main problems doe me would be compositional, there are so many crazy hard, repeated angles in the figure + mountains that its stiffening up the whole picture too much. The left leg and right arm, with the torso and right leg make an "X" shape right in the center of the image.. Plus having the brightest light right behind her waist draws your eye to the X even more. Not sure if this is what you were going for, but I'd try to break up those angles with some nice flowing curves. And Id throw a little atmospheric perspective into the mountains to push your value range and make the figure pop more. It is great to see how far you've come :) last figures looking super solid too