07-27-2015, 04:53 AM
Haha okay, hello there :) Fist to go is that I like your imagery
Love the edges on the lion study but I can't find many of them in the image above it.
Also the shapes in the image a quite flat, the blue shoulders, the boobs, the arms.
Also there are a number of tangents. And as everyone knows, tangents are evil and should be avoided. :3
But before I go here is a little overpaint i did, hope you dont mind. I tried not to change the look of the image too much so mostly got rid of the tangents.
Love the edges on the lion study but I can't find many of them in the image above it.
Also the shapes in the image a quite flat, the blue shoulders, the boobs, the arms.
Also there are a number of tangents. And as everyone knows, tangents are evil and should be avoided. :3
But before I go here is a little overpaint i did, hope you dont mind. I tried not to change the look of the image too much so mostly got rid of the tangents.