03-18-2016, 12:43 PM
Nice progress over the last few pages. Those portraits have definitely gotten much better!
In regard to some things that could be improved upon -- your values are muddied in a lot of these, so just be sure to better separate those, and I think that would go hand in hand with what Eristhe mentioned about being more deliberate with your light source. There's some overuse of texture as well in a few of these which creates a lot of visual noise. Take a little more time beforehand to plan everything that you think will be going into you're painting and I that will definitely make a big difference! :]
In regard to some things that could be improved upon -- your values are muddied in a lot of these, so just be sure to better separate those, and I think that would go hand in hand with what Eristhe mentioned about being more deliberate with your light source. There's some overuse of texture as well in a few of these which creates a lot of visual noise. Take a little more time beforehand to plan everything that you think will be going into you're painting and I that will definitely make a big difference! :]